INTO DUSK

Across the summer

the dogs of the big houses

bark into the dusk.

I see the lights go

on one by one. Old houses.

The water survives

the summer people.

Across the darkling Bay raw

voices deepen night.

INTO DUSK

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  1. The repetition and difference of images take the reader through the reader through the languid rhythms of summer. The closing lines’ ‘raw voices’ echo the dogs of teh big houses in hte poem’s opening. They could either be dogs or people opr both or the voices of all creatures. The reader is thus brought into the community of life in the summer.

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